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[bujhee kom]

Originally Posted by Tigers_eye
Is her name Nakita by any chance? Keep her away from Elton John then. Else no worries.
What a wonderful melody. May be you can make this poem in to a song!! She may love you more.

thank you so much mijan bhaiya for your wonderful advice! she doesn't like elton john though mijan bhai!

Originally Posted by Gopal Bhar
3 lines enuff.....just refine it further....you got a cool haiku flavor to it...

thank you gopal bhaiya for your kind words and advice!


and now after thanking both you, i must tell you two what happened after i recited the poem to her!
.....she threw hot coffee at me and kicked me out of the house last night! so, since lsat night i have been sleeping in a park with one of my cats! she kicked the cat out too! can me and my cat move in with you guys now?

[Zeeshan]

Originally Posted by bujhee kom
thank you so much mijan bhaiya for your wonderful advice! she doesn't like elton john though mijan bhai!


thank you gopal bhaiya for your kind words and advice!


and now after thanking both you, i must tell you two what happened after i recited the poem to her!
.....she threw hot coffee at me and kicked me out of the house last night! so, since lsat night i have been sleeping in a park with one of my cats! she kicked the cat out too! can me and my cat move in with you guys now?

i hope you have a prenup....