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Originally Posted by mufi_02
nice write up singh. you could have avoided the last paragraph "I wish.." because then it stops being an objective article and becomes more of an op-ed piece (which is fine if that's what your intention was to begin with). just a constructive criticisms as we Bengalis are very generous with that
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I'm open to the suggestions...The last paragraph just brought out the inner exuberance in me.
Oh well, keep the constructive criticisms coming
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